Storytelling As An Art

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(By Mike McVay) Podcast Movement took place in Nashville earlier this month. I had the honor of speaking and addressing Story Telling as an Art. The focus was on podcasters, but the tips and structure of the presentation is applicable to air talent, podcasters and anyone who does public speaking. The roots of my presentation, like most media things that I’m involved with, are based in radio.

Why do some speakers create the urge to binge every episode of a podcast in one setting and others lose a listener halfway through the story? It starts with the way you tell that story, your delivery, and most importantly, that you know where’re you’re going when you start your story journey. It’s about using descriptive words, the pace with which you tell the story, and it’s about you as the story teller understanding the message at its core. It’s about much more than simply reading letters on a page.

Bruce Springsteen is one of the greatest story tellers of all time. His songs are all stories. If they weren’t accompanied by music, you’d consider them to be a poem or a short story. Take for example Springsteen’s song “Thunder Road.” We dissected the first part of this hit from the album “Greetings from Asbury Park, NJ”

The screen door slams, Mary’s dress sways
Like a vision she dances across the porch as the radio plays
Roy Orbison singing for the lonely
Hey that’s me and I want you only
Don’t turn me home again
I just can’t face myself alone again
Don’t run back inside, darling you know just what I’m here for
So you’re scared and you’re thinking that maybe we ain’t that young anymore
Show a little faith, there’s magic in the night
You ain’t a beauty, but hey you’re alright
Oh, and that’s alright with me.

Using visualization of the words to paint a picture in the mind of the attendees, every line was examined and a picture painted, in the mind of the listeners.

The Screen Door Slams – You immediately see an old wooden screen door. The screen is torn and curled up in one of the lower corners. If it’s an old door, when it slammed, it didn’t close all the way. The door is slightly ajar. It’s an old wooden door, so that means there’s an old wooden porch. The porch has to have a pair of old muddy boots sitting on it. That leads me to envision a farmhouse with acreage somewhere within view from the swing on the porch. We’re looking out at a field. No other houses in sight.

Mary’s Dress Sways. Like a Vision She Dances Across the Porch as the Radio Plays – In the eyes of my mind I can see a woman in a soft light blue shift dress, yellow flowers on it, and it sways back and forth as she spins and dances across the porch. Roy Orbison’s song “Only the Lonely” is playing on the radio. The radio has to be an older plastic model that’s plugged into an outdoor socket.

And so, it goes. Dissecting the description from the rest of this hit song. Depicting a warm summers’ night when an older man and woman interact as they meet on the front porch of this old country house. He pleads with her to allow him back into her life. To end his loneliness. To resume a romance that had gone awry. At least that’s the picture that engulfed me as I heard the song and read the lyrics.

Here’s what we know;

Stories, when told powerfully and descriptively, are most captivating, memorable, and easy to share with others as you repeat them.

The best stories are those that you can visualize. If you can visualize it, you can tell it visually.

If you’re delivering a scripted story, then start with understanding the words on the page. Don’t read aloud the caricatures and letters on a page. Read the words and think about them, before you turn on the microphone. Think about the story and what it means and then tell me that story.

If you are not working from a script, but you’re telling a story from notes, then think about how you want your story to end. If you don’t know where you’re going, then any road will take you there. Remember … the purpose of this exercise is to engage your listener and keep them throughout the entire story.

People communicate in stories. Luckily, storytelling is something we almost all do naturally, starting at a very young age. But there’s a difference between good storytelling and great storytelling. It isn’t about the number of words. It’s about the delivery and choice of words used.

Sometimes, telling the story quickly and without embellishment, makes it a better story. One time an air talent asked me how they could tell a story quickly by giving me a three-sentence example of what the story was about. They asked “How do I tell a story about finding a racoon living in the engine of my truck, which kept it from starting, and when I opened the hood to see what was wrong, the racoon jumped at me. I don’t know who was more scared. The racoon or me?” I replied “You just did.” Don’t overthink your story.

There is a science behind how we hear stories.  The left side of the brain helps us to think logically. The right side of the brain helps us recall memories and experience emotion. Both sides are linked together by the Neocortex. When we tell stories, both sides of the brain are stimulated and work together. We see the whole picture. We connect to the person telling the stories.

Storytelling is the key to communication in media. Be it on-the-air, on a podcast, during a newscast, a sportscast, a YouTube Video, from the stage during your musical performance … whatever the platform and where ever you are.

When you tell a story … be efficient. Not Brief. Be efficient. Think of it as Hallway Talk for efficiency … Communicate as you would if you were passing someone in the hallway at work or at school. We’d face each other as we start talking, stand sideways and face each other as we pass one another, and then walk backwards facing each other as we finish the story.

“Never mention anything if it’s not referenced later in your story.” Interestingly this is also a cardinal rule for screenplays— wasted words can lead to what’s called “false foreshadowing”: The audience is forced to note and remember a detail which ultimately doesn’t figure in the story resolution. No one has that kind of an attention span. Don’t waste words.

If you think about how people talk when they tell a story, their inflection starts the story and that sets the stage, and then you build the story to a finale. The tone and pace with which you tell a story is important in how the audience hears a story. Faster for excitement. Slower to emphasize tension. Pause for attention. Match your delivery to the emotion that you want to evoke in the audience.

Great stories are universal; Great storytelling is about taking a piece of the human condition (so things like birth, growth, emotionality, aspiration, conflict) and conveying it in a unique situation. What you’re trying to do, when you tell a story, is to write about an event in your life that made you feel some particular way. And what you’re trying to do, when you tell a story, is to get the audience to have that same feeling.

Great stories have a clear structure and purpose. What is the emotion that you want the listener to feel when they hear your story? Why must you tell this particular story? What’s burning within your soul that your story feeds off of? What greater purpose does the story serve? What lesson does it teach? How do you want the listener to feel?

Great stories have a character you can cheer for, or loath, or admire, or dislike. Great characters create an emotion. Your story telling, because of your inflection, supports that view of the character. Your inflection influences how the listener thinks of the story. Examples; Let’s eat, grandma. Let’s eat grandma.

Great stories appeal to our deepest emotions; anger, disgust, fear, happiness, sadness and surprise. Great stories are surprising and unexpected. What makes a story compelling is when our perceptions of our reality are challenged and forces us to question ourselves and our perspective. Great stories are simple and focused. We know a good story when we hear one. They have the right amount of information, they aren’t over-the-top in description, and they are … that word I wrote earlier … efficient.

Don’t read me a story. Tell me a story.

 

Mike McVay is President of McVay Media and can be reached at [email protected]

5 COMMENTS

  1. Mike is right with this business needs to learn and quick, is that we rarely break songs anymore and the only thing that separates us from any other content streaming services two things one we are free and always there to compelling content through storytelling character building FOMO and story arcs! Another great read Mr. McVay! If every programmer read this the business would be in a lot different shape

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